Father dear
My feet ache and my throat roar
My face sore from the salt and skin
Oh father dear I sadly fear I shall no longer be
Do not follow I shall vanish
And with these tears I pray to god
Oh god my dear save my soul
But most of all save…
Oh father dear let your soul be blessed
And with that shall be taken with the wind
Pray for me
Oh father dear
4 comments:
very well done poem... think about putting more color inside of the poem
Although I know the story behind this i have to say even the first time i read this i felt like there was a great deal of emotion put into this piece. I felt though it was sort of a play off of the poem we read today which is cool! great job keep it up!!
dude, this is crazyy! good... you can feel the emotions when you read it! i really liked this
awwwa thanx guys :D u make me blush :D hahaha
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