Scilence
Pure silence
nothing but scilence
everyone has left
some might say there in a better place but I just say, there gone
no one to talk to
no one to have fun with
no one to laugh with
no one to cry with
I miss her smile
I miss his humor
I miss comming home to their faces
but there gone now and its time to move on
gone
scilence
all I hear in my breaths
silence
pure silence
nothing but scilence
scilence
3 comments:
I love how you've formatted the poem so the reader pauses after each line. Also, the repeition of "pure silence" makes the silence that much louder.
Its very chilling to me to read this. It really reaches out to give you a good sense of the dead scilence.
i think that this
is going
to make me
CRYYYY!!!!
that is such a sad thing it makes me want to sob uncontoralbly.
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